His Eyes.

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I'm so jobless.

And I would tell you that I knew him well,
But it would be a lie, for I don’t think I did
Or anyone else did, for that matter.
He was guarded, always had been;
I wish I could say that he opened up to me,
For that would prove his humanness,
Wouldn’t it? To feel pain is to be human.
However, it would be a lie.
Never once did a whimper of pain leave his
Sculpted lips; never once did those
Stormy eyes shed a tear.
Only infrequently did those beautiful irises
Give any indication of the pain he suffered.
Only infrequently did his eyes ask for help.
And only all the time I wished to give him
The world, the one person who I knew
Deserved it the most.

-Γ—-

I write such weird stuff, lol! And I’ve written a similar thing before, which is funny – there’s no guy around for miles. Well, no guy I’m seeing, and no guy who I currently like like. So, I don’t know how I come up work this stuff. I find it amusing. Those of you lovely people who read my previous post, know I wrote about a book project. Well, that goes on a hiatus, as I have make up exams to do. Such tragedy, much sad.

Well, tell me what you thought of this! Constructive criticism (any criticism) is highly appreciated! Also, my drawing of the WordPress logo is pretty rad, isn’t it? 😂

Love always,
Sky xoxo.

P.S.: One of those days, I’ll sign off with my real name, I get confused sometimes, lol!
P.P.S.: I’m curious; does anyone here write/read on Wattpad?

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30 thoughts on “His Eyes.

  1. I can totally relate to the amusement of writing such stuff xD I write stuff like this too without seeing or having a crush on someone. I guess it’s all the novels we read that drive us to writing such stuff :p
    Anyway, it was really good and it kinda reminded me of Will Herondale(from the infernal devices trilogy by Clare)
    Dunno if you’ve read that though.
    See? When I start rambling about books there’s no stopping*shakes head*

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    1. I knew you could relate! Yeah, probably all those stories. πŸ˜›
      Thanks! I haven’t read it, but I might, if I get time. 😐
      The thing with me is, I have read more fanfiction than I’ve read books! That’s because I don’t like ebooks, and so I end up going to those fanfiction sites. πŸ˜›

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      1. I have my make up exams to finish, then I have to study for SATs, then I have to study for finals… So… I’ll see when I can. 😭

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  2. He appears to be trying to be a strong guy here.

    Apart from that, I am also rocking the same boat. No. I wasn’t speaking about the guy, but girl ofcourse. You would be surprised to the number of girls I have spoken to. It is a single digit number and one hand is needed for counting. But I talk about girls, describing them and highlighting their characteristic features. But there is no such girl I have come across. I was almost about to post the link of the post, but then it is on my other blog with no anonymity.
    Anonymity is quite hard, is it not? It is more difficult when you have managing three blogs, one anonymous and the other not at all anonymous. I might have slipped a lot of times. Okay, I am going off topic.

    PS : The post was great. I think it is how writers interpret things and rewrite the world around them. You did a better job than I could ever do.
    Keep writing.
    Take Care. πŸ™‚

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    1. Oh, that made my day, haha!
      I talk to a lot of guys – I think I have more guy friends than girls. I know what you mean, though.
      Anonymity is so difficult! Half the time I feel like putting up my real name, and to do away with the pseudonym!
      Aww, that postscript! Thank you so much! πŸ™‚

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      1. Well I am glad to hear that, I mean read that. πŸ™‚
        I wish I did that too, but with girls. πŸ˜› But it is just a distant dream. *goes to the corner and cries*

        Tell me about it. It is much worse when you have no idea what to post where. I am always confused what to post in the anonymous blog and on the other blog. It is so hard. I am currently trying to don a split personality, only that I am not suffering from one.

        You are welcome. πŸ˜€

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      2. It’s not that difficult, we don’t bite. πŸ˜›
        Delete one blog maybe? 😐
        Just a suggestion. 😐
        Split personality disorder is pretty cool, though! Still, I feel bad for you. 😐
        😁

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      3. Haha. Thats’ a good assurance. It’s not the girls. It’s me. I am more of an introvert kind.

        First – Six years old.
        Second – Photography.
        Third – This one – for being brutally honest and pull everybodys’ legs. But people here have been so kind and sweet, I am not able to bring out my worst. I feel insecure, you know.
        Thanks. I have thought about it a lot of times. But idk what to do.

        Yeah, it would be even more cool if I were a superhero vigilante in the night. #justSaying you know.

        Umm , I feel the same way about myself too. That’s sounds even more stupid. -_-

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      4. Well, that is something one can’t argue with. All I can say to that is, you better get some extrovert to show you the ways of the high life. xD
        Oh, those are tough to delete. I know, people here are so sweet!
        Oh, I wish. I wish I was struck by lightning like Barry Allen. That would be so much fun.
        Oh, don’t. You have no reason to. πŸ™‚

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      5. Yeah. 😦
        Thanks for the advice. I should do that, but *Introvert alert*.

        Right? Very sweet.

        Same pinch. I am watching the second season and there are more Speedsters. Damn, I wish I was one like them. πŸ˜€

        Well, thanks. πŸ™‚

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      6. Oh, Barry Allen! He’s so cute! 😍
        Do you remember how he says, “Lightning gave me abs?”
        I just about died! 😍😍😍😍😍

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  3. *gushes about how good this is*
    *thinks about how there’s no guy like that for me*
    *then thinks about Luke Hemmings*
    *back to thinking about how my life is a joke*
    *then gushes some more about this*
    P.S. You’re talented.
    P.P.S Embrace that fact. AND DO NOT THANK ME AFTER READING THIS πŸ˜›
    P.P.P.S I read and write on Wattpad πŸ™‚

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