she broke beautifully
like snowflakes falling
one
by
one
on cold winter mornings
and then melting
in the palm of your hand
as you catch them
she fell apart slowly
but surely
came undone the way
one unbuttons his lover’s
blouse
lovingly, but firmly
no room for argument
no room for hesitation
no room
at all
she fell apart in his hands
like one drops a vase
splinters
flying
everywhere
with no one to pick up the
pieces
oh, the pieces, in thousands
and no one to pick them up.
not a soul.
-×-
I should be studying physics!
Love,
Sky xoxo.
P.S.: Feedback, please? ❤
Feedback: It is brilliant! I’ve noticed this before as well and must say, that your comparisons are wonderful and add so much to your writing!
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Wow, thank you!
Oh, they are? Thanks! 🙂
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I’m mesmerised at the beauty of your words.
P.S. Never procrastinate when it comes to physics :p
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Oh, thank you!
I can’t do anything ya, it’s so… ugh. 😂
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Beautiful!
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Thank you! 🙂
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Oh this is so heartfelt and heartbreaking. Your words are just eloquent.
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Thank you so much!
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You are welcome. 🙂
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🙂
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And as each piece fell,
Close but not close enough,
Enough to get back again.
Again to put sense in the delicate snowflake,
To not be so fragile and grow some thorns.
Because,
They do not deserve the snowflakes and butterflies,
Because,
All they give is heartbreaks and web of lies.
This was brilliantly written!
P.S This is my way to give a compliment.
You will see more of this is future 😉
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OMG!
Wow. I am gobsmacked. How can you make up poems on the go? 😛
Teach me, haha!
Thank you so much!
Looking forward to it, haha!
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Haha. I don’t know. I just know that I can do this all day. And I hope I can. Write as much as I can before I decide to jump off the bridge (which is never)
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I know what you mean. And is engineering that bad, huh? 😛
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haha. No. And I graduated 😛
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My bad. 😛
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oh I am sure not. 😛
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Hahahah, you’re too kind. 😛
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Uh. yes a little. 😉
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🙂
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Sterling! I like it 🙂
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