brought to justice,
unjustly, by the one
who vowed to love;
quietly echo
her cries for help.
no one comes forward;
she dies a cold death.
-×-
I’m so totally procrastinating my birthday post. It will come, patience, little grasshoppers.
(That’s a ref, innit?)
Love always,
Sky xoxo.
P.S.: I kept in with the wintery theme, and wrote on something cold. Who cares what it’s about. *Wink wink*
P.P.S.: Somebody asked me if Debilitation was about an abusive relationship. The answer to that question is no. Also, this one is very much about an abusive relationship.
Heart-wrenchingly beautiful!
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Thank you! 🙂
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Anytime! 🙂
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🙂
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Wow, you did awesome on this! I love how you can get so much of a message into just a small poem, that’s amazing.
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Thank you so much! Yes, poetry is the best! I’m trying to improve, and comments like this make my day! 😀
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Awe it’s no problem! I’m looking forward to reading more from you 🙂
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Thank you, that would be amazing! 🙂
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I loved it. Totally. I haven’t been that active from past many weeks, I dunno what’s happened to me🙈 Anyway, so I looked over that you’ve turned 16. I’m so sorry. Belated happy birthday sky💜 We were like comment buddies and then I just vanished under the cloak🙈 But I’m planning on coming back as soon as I… I dunno, feel like it maybe? Anyway, belated happy birthday once again💜
P.s. just out of curiosity, how are you in 11th when you’ve just turned 16? Weren’t you taken back for late admission or something? :p
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Oh, thank you so much! ❤
Yeah, I noticed your absence! ALSO, missed you SO MUCH!
Thank you so much, again! 😀
Take your time, I’ll be looking forward to reading your stuff again! 🙂
Thanks, once again! xD
No, I’m 1999 born! My birthday’s just a little later in the year. xD
My sister was 16 in twelfth; she had started school a year early, and still skipped a class. xD
Aah, so great to hear from you! 😀
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You did? Well I missed you too and I missed writing too.
You’re welcome 😀
I guess the system must be different in Gujarat. In Delhi, people who are born after October have to wait till the new session, I know as my friend is one of them :p
Anyway, I was just curious xD
I’ll be updating soon, toodles💜
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Yes, I did!
😀
No, same. 😛
What can one do if I need a transfer to seventh and I’ve already done sixth? I get in seventh. xD
It’s cool, curiosity is not a sin. 😂
Yay, see you!
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BUDDDDDDY
OMG
I LOVE THIS
I LOVE ALL YOUR WRITING
WHY ARE YOU SO TALENTED?
IT’S NOT FAIR
Okay, I’m going to stop with the capitals now 😛
But seriously, this is amazing. 🙂
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OMG SHUBBY
AAAH I’M SO GLAD YOU LIKE THIS!
Please, you’re more talented, haha! ❤
Thank you! 😀
So, so much! 😀
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Hahahahaha
That’s a nice joke…
Recently all my writing’s become so “Tumblr-y”.. 😛
And you’re craazy talented 🙂
And for some reason your posts don’t show up on my reader..
So now I’m basically stalking your blog 😛
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Please, I’m serious!
Everybody loves tumblr, you know! xD
Omg, thanks! :’)
Omg, whyyy you do this WordPress.
Yay, Shubby is stalking my blog! 😛
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HAHAAHA
I’m on a roll now xD
I’ll be commenting on stuff since god knows when 😛
Also, when I mean Tumblr, I mean sad Tumblr stuff.. Like if I send you a link to that blog, you’ll wonder what is wrong with me 😛
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I’ll be looking forward to that. xD
I’m sure there’s nothing wrong with you. 😛
There is, however, something insanely wrong with my autocorrect. 😭
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Autocorrect has messed up so much in my life..
I’m pretty sure years later if I have any regrets, the blame will somehow come on autocorrect xD
And I’ve spammed I think every post of yours since the last few months 😛
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Omg, yes! Same! Autocorrect needs a life, instead of ruining ours!
Haha, yeah. 😛
I’ll stalk you soon, keep looking. 😛
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Hahahaha
sure sure xD
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Lol, ya. xD
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